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« Reply #15 on: January 29, 2018, 14:14:35 »
Gonna continue my story soon ^^ after 2 years XD
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« Reply #16 on: January 31, 2018, 09:50:30 »
I see that your english has improved since then.
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« Reply #17 on: February 02, 2018, 12:50:50 »
Yea a bit, though still is bad XD
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« Reply #18 on: February 02, 2018, 16:06:53 »
Story Part 3. 2 february 2018 check first post :)
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« Reply #19 on: February 02, 2018, 16:25:02 »
nice.
I'd say you re-read it again, there are a few errors with words and stuff, but they can be ignored for the time being.
decent read, provided that there aren't too many right now.
Hope you right more :)
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« Reply #20 on: February 02, 2018, 16:32:32 »
the story was a very good read, i wish you best of luck Saiyahito!
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« Reply #21 on: February 02, 2018, 16:40:18 »
Thank you guys, yea i will try to make a manga then put some music too. The eviorment is even better with music.
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« Reply #22 on: February 02, 2018, 17:09:46 »
Update! I edited :)
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« Reply #23 on: January 01, 2025, 08:58:26 »
Could use a rewrite, maybe an explanation of sailing through a paranormal region of sea to explain how he switched universes... @Saiyahito
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