Saiko Akuma

[goldustian]

Name:Saiko akuma
Age:15
Gender:male
Height:6.3ft
Weight:153Ibs
Hair:short 
Facial hair:none
Hair color:brown
Eye color: Grey
Blood type:hh
Primary chakra nature: Fire
Hidden Village: Heizukagure
Clan:Akuma clan
Good or evil at heart?:Eh neutral
Organization: Shadows of the haze


Description of the character's personality:Calm tactical and collected. (Despite the name)


 Character's history: He is a direct descendant of demons. So he is expected to reach high levels of strength. This he has done. He has stomped out other ninja in the exams and fought through countless missions. He made order in the chaos of the Akuma clan and made a detructive force of a clan. He also founded the Shadow Walker. He has been though many things to reach his status but still has plenty of energy left in him to accomplish more.

 

[IbrahimRafi]

Why is everyone's parents dead in their history lol

Nonetheless, nice character and welcome to SLO

[goldustian]

Why is everyone's parents dead in their history lol

Nonetheless, nice character and welcome to SLO

Why is everyone's parents dead in their history lol

Nonetheless, nice character and welcome to SLO

this might sound horrible but i needed them to be dead for my story

[HiChikara]

I like that Nami more. But you're ok. 

Spoiler: show

Lulls jk :D :D cool character and welcome to Haze, Buddy.

[Toratsume Nyshn]

Why is everyone's parents dead in their history,lol

#parentlivesmatter

So in order to stay alive he stole from professional Shinobi to stay alive.

You typed stay alive two times in the same sentence.
Also.... I was thinking wouldn't it be easier for him to steal from normal humans... rather than shinobis? js... after all staying alive is more important than becoming more skilled (if that's what you're implying by stealing from shinobis )

It was getting a bit confounding towards the end... and yeah, I gut dem narutoish vibes =3

Anyways.... good luck

[goldustian]

Why is everyone's parents dead in their history,lol

#parentlivesmatter

So in order to stay alive he stole from professional Shinobi to stay alive.

You typed stay alive two times in the same sentence.
Also.... I was thinking wouldn't it be easier for him to steal from normal humans... rather than shinobis? js... after all staying alive is more important than becoming more skilled (if that's what you're implying by stealing from shinobis )

It was getting a bit confounding towards the end... and yeah, I gut dem narutoish vibes =3

Anyways.... good luck

Crap your right i will fix it i turned him sadistic and it actually gave me a lot of ideas for the future thanks

[goldustian]

I like that Nami more. But you're ok. 

Spoiler: show

Lulls jk :D :D cool character and welcome to Haze, Buddy.

ive been told its a girl name but idc

[StriderOtaku]

This isn't bad at all.
All those peepz complaining about the name..deal with it :p

[goldustian]

This isn't bad at all.
All those peepz complaining about the name..deal with it :p

Thanks i have had like 4 people tell me on discord that its a girl name

[Reminance]

This isn't bad at all.
All those peepz complaining about the name..deal with it :p

Thanks i have had like 4 people tell me on discord that its a girl name

it's a girl name WTF DUDE WTF!!@#!#@!$!@$@#!@#
nah it don't matter as long as you like it.

[goldustian]

This isn't bad at all.
All those peepz complaining about the name..deal with it :p

Thanks i have had like 4 people tell me on discord that its a girl name

it's a girl name WTF DUDE WTF!!@#!#@!$!@$@#!@#
nah it don't matter as long as you like it.

I changed my name any ways and i thought if i had a new name i might as well make a new story as well

[taigakun]

Why is everyone's parents dead in their history,lol

#parentlivesmatter

Amen
Nice character tho. Liked the story.

[goldustian]

Why is everyone's parents dead in their history lol

Nonetheless, nice character and welcome to SLO

I changed it now my parents arent dead. I read all the ones with it in it and found it cliche.

[Toratsume Nyshn]

Drunk daddy, sick mommy... I won't call it original .. yet it's better than dead..
Hope you write the next part soon

[taigakun]

Hahah that title. But like the revamped story tho gj