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Title: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Shivraj on October 30, 2016, 15:05:22

SLO Arena Battle #10 - @Mars vs @Konohuro

Mars

Spoiler: show

Konohuro

Spoiler: show

Konohuro Kirishima, a famous clansman of the aforementioned, was sitting in a bar in the Hidden Hill enjoying himself - when to his dismay; the ANBU appeared next to him.

“What do the kage’s dogs have to do with me?” He asked as he slowly creeped his right hand towards the other, where he concealed his Okatana.
“It would be wise of you to not draw that, we’re only here to carry a message from the Kage” the mysterious man to the left put his hands on the table to show that he was not planning an ambush with weapons.

“The Kage asks that you follow us outside of the bar to his office, since he is busy with work, and well, he’s not allowed into the bar; we’ll be waiting outside.” The two ANBU agents disappeared.

“The Kage, huh? What could he want with me? Does he perhaps know why I’m here?” Konohuro thought as he got up and started to walk towards the exit, “I won’t be getting much info if the Kage catches wind of me, seems I’ll have to act a bit.”

The ANBU don’t roam around on the streets, so Konohuro had to go to the Kage building on his own, but he could feel someone watching him, and the building wasn’t too hard to find, seeing as it was the biggest one in the whole village, he quickly dashed to the entrance, and up the stairs, one he had it in his sights.

He decided he should knock on the door, since just busting in would not fit a noble of his stature, however the door was already ajar, “Perhaps someone forgot to close it?”, Konohuro knocked on the door anyway, and waited for a response.

But there wasn’t any, so he decided to peek in, “I’m sorry, am I interrupting something?” he said as he slowly walked in the door, but there was no one there. “Hmm? Perhaps he went to the bathroo-” Konohuro was interrupted by a short assailant, who quickly burst in through the doors and hit his neck.

POOF

“Shit, a shadow clone huh?” the man said as the smoke cleared. “Not quite what I was expecting when your servants said you wanted to chat” he was surprised by a voice behind him, which belonged to none other than Konohuro, who was leaning on the wall next to the entrance to the Kage’s office.

“I suppose we’re doing this the hard way then, Kage-sama?” Konohuro unsheated his sword, and opened his right eye. “Tch, I should’ve expected you to be prepared” Mars expressed his annoyance in his tone of speech, “I’m afraid that’s what happens when you lack actual battle experience, no matter how strong you are.” he walked into the office once again, this time holding his Okatana up in a defensive stance, while Mars took out a kunai in one hand

Konohuro was the first to attack, he spun around and put all of his strength into a huge swing towards Mars’ unarmed side, trying to use his range to his advantage, but Mars was faster than he expected, but not fast enough that he couldn’t follow, and thus he saw the kick coming towards him, it still caught him off guard since he redirected his sword’s momentum downwards to try and slice off his foot, only to have his sword be interrupted by a hard object on top of his leg, “Leg weights, perhaps? Classic Taijutsu addict...” Konohuro thought as he backed off.

“Want to take this outside? The roof should provide enough room for the both of us to go all out.” Konohuro asked the young Kage, “Race you there!” Mars said as he rushed out the office. “Hmph, I suppose I’ll take my time then” Konohuro said as he casually walked out of the entrance, where the doors had once been hinged, but now lay on the floor.

Mars used the time he got to his advantage, having set up various clones and hiding them, so that he could ambush Konohuro, who had just walked up the stairs as the last of Mars’ clones finished hiding, and Mars himself was standing right in the middle of the roof, “You sure took long, are you tired already?” Mars said, but a second later he saw Konohuro running towards him with his sword in a thrusting position, “Enough talk, let’s get serious.” he said as he closed in rapidly on Mars, “Is he thinking of stabbing me with a katana? That’s… stupid.” keeping his kunai up and running towards Konohuro, as his shadow clones jumped out all at once to outnumber him.

Konohuro just had to land one hit on all the shadow clones, however, when it’s 11 opponents you’re up against, it’s not really to focus on all of them at once, especially with one eye, thus he decided to close his right eye and rely on his other senses, chakra sensing, hearing etc.

He swung and cleared his right side, then he ducked and stuck out his leg as his momentum carried him and caused 4 clones to fall down, he then quickly stood up and blocked the kunai of the 2 other opponents, one of which was the original Mars, with his O-Katana.

Mars took this opportunity to deliver a powerful kick right to Konohuro’s stomach, who stepped out of Mars’ way and stabbed the shadow clone that was left standing, then jumping to dodge the lowkick from Mars and threw kunai to finish off the 4 clones that were still getting up from their fall

Mars decided to step back, “He’s really skilled with that sword, but he’s also good at taijutsu, I suppose I’ll have to stop holding my speed back.” he took off the weights he had been wearing on his leg, hand and waist.

“Oh, fina-” Mars didn’t give Konohuro time to finish as he disappeared, only to appear 10 centimeters from Konohuro’s face, driving his fist into Konohuro’s stomach, “Shit! That hurt!”, but Konohuro regained his composure quickly and pushed Mars away, as Mars quickly spun around and swung the kunai’s tip towards Kono’s skull, who blocked Mars’ left hand with his right.

Mars spun the kunai in his hand so that the tip would be facing him, instead of Kono, then pointed the kunai towards Kono’s right eye, while driving his hand along Kono’s.
Konohuro blocked the kunai with his sword, but Mars grabbed his arm and used it as a leverage to pull Kono in for a roundhouse kick, Konohuro tried to block the kick with the flat of his sword, but was still pushed back by the force of the kick.

Konohuro was quick to recover, as he jumped forward and slashed downwards, which Mars dodged by stepping to his left, but Kono caught Mars off guard with a spin kick to his face.
“Hey, that hurt!” Mars sounded angry.

“Well, then you’re free to hurt me” Konohuro replied, “I can’t keep this up any longer, I’ll have to depend on genjutsu now”. “Oh, I will” Mars quickly cast handseals to Suiton: Suiryudan No Jutsu, and smashed his hands down on the ground to create a Water Dragon.

The Water Dragon was heading towards Konohuro quickly, and so was Mars, Konohuro cast Wind Bullet jutsu to disrupt the water dragon, as he couldn’t risk running away from the dragon and using any of the little stamina he had left, he stood there and waited for Mars to get close.

He used his O-Katana to feint a right swing, but grabbed Mars’ right wrist with his right hand, after dropping his katana, and punched Mars’ stomach and ribs with his elbow with all the strength he could muster, he then quickly threw Mars down, who landed on his back. Kono picked up his blade.

“I’ve had enough!” Mars activated 4 inner gates and in an instant started kicking Konohuro so fast that Kono had no time to react, and was violently thrown to the ground. “Get up!” Mars shouted angrily.

Konohuro did get up, but then Mars couldn’t find him, he was… gone.

Mars felt a sharp pain in his chest, like something had stabbed him. He looked down to see his chest all bloody, and a long O-Katana sticking out of the wound. “W-When...did you…stab me?” Mars asked, speaking each word with a great deal of pain. “I put you in a genjutsu when I held your wrist” He replied “Unfortunately for you, you didn’t notice it”. “Huh, so...this is how I die? I can already imagine the headlines.” He said slowly

Mars suddenly started remembering events from a month ago. He was walking around in his village, only to have a poster stroke his curiosity, it read “Arena” in big, bold words at the top, while the rest of the poster had smaller text written over it “Do You Crave A Challenge? Is Daily Life Just Too Boring?” Mars knew that this was gonna be just what he was looking for, so he continued reading “Then Apply For Our Arena Project! We Pick Contestants From All Over The 12 Villages, Rogue or Village Shinobi, It Doesn’t Matter! This Is Your Chance For An All Out (Legal) Fight To The Death!” He was hesitant at first, mainly because it was open to both rogue and village shinobi, and that it was a fight to the death, but then he thought “I mean, how bad could it be?” and he headed for the registration office. The officers were surprised to have the Kage, but they calmed down after a bit.

Mars was regretting the decision he made that day “I’m sorry Remi, seems like I won’t be able to make it to that Kage summit after all.” he laughed silently.

Mars seemed to have relaxed from his previous, angry mood. “Well, I suppose I should’ve gone all out when I had the chance.” Mars said as he looked into the sky and exhaled one last time.

“Rest in Peace.” Konohuro slid his katana out of Mars’ chest and lay him down on the ground, closing his eyelids with his hand. “I didn’t expect to have to kill a kid today, but I suppose my job comes with risks and surprises.” He thought as he vanished from the roof.

Konohuro Wins!

-Written by Shivraj, edits by Snoopy and America

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Tsunayoshi on October 30, 2016, 16:15:46

Amazing. I guess the fact that Mars is just un-experienced is the reason he lost.

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Shivraj on October 30, 2016, 16:19:43

Quote from: Tsunayoshi on October 30, 2016, 16:15:46

Amazing. I guess the fact that Mars is just un-experienced is the reason he lost.

He has 0 genjutsu, not to mention, I don't think Mars goes all out from the start, thus I didn't get him to open his gates too soon, since Kono wasn't overpowering him, he was fighting at the same level-ish, with Mars getting some hits in. Kono landed a hit on him, which made him angry, and he released 4 gates :) (you know what happens after that)

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Diamond Lee on October 30, 2016, 16:59:02

Great fight! Nice long read!

Spoiler: show

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: StriderOtaku on October 30, 2016, 17:06:59

It's nice. Though, I would've thought a Kage would put up more of a fight.

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Tsunayoshi on October 30, 2016, 17:12:18

The kage is at the age of 12. He specializes in TaiJutsu, 0 points in Genjutsu.

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: StriderOtaku on October 30, 2016, 17:18:58

Quote from: Tsunayoshi on October 30, 2016, 17:12:18

The kage is at the age of 12. He specializes in TaiJutsu, 0 points in Genjutsu.

12 yrs? wtf. Now i can totally see him getting beaten with his inexperience all..

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: frzuh on October 30, 2016, 17:19:41

R.I.P

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Diamond Lee on October 30, 2016, 18:00:00

I'm glad genjutsu will be balanxed/nerfed in the arena 2.0, cuz in this arena, it's brok3n af (like zed)

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Konohuro on October 30, 2016, 18:04:17

I really have expected a different outcome.
If you are going to consider the actual kages as kages in this contest, I think they should have a bit of advantage, a kage level skills. For e.g. even if Mars didn't put any genjutsu points in his character, a kage would still see through some basic genjutsus.

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: StriderOtaku on October 30, 2016, 19:04:42

Quote from: Konohuro on October 30, 2016, 18:04:17

I really have expected a different outcome.
If you are going to consider the actual kages as kages in this contest, I think they should have a bit of advantage, a kage level skills. For e.g. even if Mars didn't put any genjutsu points in his character, a kage would still see through some basic genjutsus.

thats what i thought..they say he's just 12 but he's still a kage tho.To be a kage at 12 you have got to be the definition of prodigious.

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Sanji on October 30, 2016, 20:06:55

nice jop guys,i enjoy reading that was good!!
rip mars,i was hoping to battle u if i win ken.

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Reminance on October 30, 2016, 22:32:14

You don't get the title kage without atleast having some basic experience, and even then Kages won't die that easily just because of a silly genjutsu. (I take it Mars his age is just a troll)

#Rant (On-topic, great read!)

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: mamoudou52404 on October 30, 2016, 23:12:03

@Shivraj do one for me mein

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Fraudulent on October 30, 2016, 23:26:52

Quote from: mamoudou52404 on October 30, 2016, 23:12:03

@Shivraj do one for me mein

That's impossible to happen at this time because the entries for the battle arena closed down a long time ago (before you came on the forum). If you wish to partake, you need to make an entry in the 2.0 Arena that will come in the future.

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Xassassin on October 31, 2016, 02:33:47

Damn this one is really good, too bad mars didnt make it, would have been a koo fight, but at least i know what might happen vs the fight with me.

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Toratsume Nyshn on October 31, 2016, 04:31:12

R.I.P Kuria
.. so when is the next hill kage being elected? (jk :p)
was a good read... but didn't expect mars would go down that easily....
anyways... probs kono is stong af

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Shivraj on October 31, 2016, 06:52:50

As I said, I thought this would be natural, and since Mars is 12 and has 100 taijutsu, I'd expect him to put all his effort in Tai, rather than Gen, which is how it seemed, since he put 0 in genjutsu, Kage or not, I only judge on the stats. And don't think I'm angry, I appreciate the feedback <3 really helps me look at how the people look at it.

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: StriderOtaku on October 31, 2016, 07:06:18

Quote from: Shivraj on October 31, 2016, 06:52:50

As I said, I thought this would be natural, and since Mars is 12 and has 100 taijutsu, I'd expect him to put all his effort in Tai, rather than Gen, which is how it seemed, since he put 0 in genjutsu, Kage or not, I only judge on the stats. And don't think I'm angry, I appreciate the feedback <3 really helps me look at how the people look at it.

Dude you do put a lot of effort into this, well done. Imo tho, despite having little experience and 0 genjutsu i would think that if someone is strong enough to be kage with those stats and that tender age then he would be an absolute frickin' c4 of a fighter. He maybe could have put up more of a fight but like i said i'm not a writer or anything and the work you do is amazing, gj.

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Shivraj on October 31, 2016, 08:59:17

Yes, however, Konohuro had a 100 in kenjutsu (sword) and 80 in Taijutsu, which is why it was rather on equal terms without the use of gates, and thank you, I'm moved by your words :).

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Manuster on November 01, 2016, 12:55:23

Everyone's surprised that Kono won and is suggesting that Mars should have more Genjutsu, but with 100 Taijutsu, he could've easily killed Konohuro in seconds and with less than 6 gates too. It's Mars' fault for holding back, and that is why he lost. He's so good in what he CAN do that he doesn't need to train in what he can't.

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Konohuro on November 02, 2016, 20:04:12

Quote from: Manuster on November 01, 2016, 12:55:23

Everyone's surprised that Kono won and is suggesting that Mars should have more Genjutsu, but with 100 Taijutsu, he could've easily killed Konohuro in seconds and with less than 6 gates too. It's Mars' fault for holding back, and that is why he lost. He's so good in what he CAN do that he doesn't need to train in what he can't.

Now, let's not rush. I don't think in this story matters the skills from game.
I took a look and compared the distributed points.
Do you think that tai is way more powerful then sword fighting?
Because:
My Tai: 80 His Tai: 100
My Ken: 100 His Ken: 0

He wasn't way faster, he wasn't way stronger and he didn't have way more stamina.

On what basis did you state that he could easily beat me in seconds?
He not having genjutsu points means he is not capable of interrupting a genjutsu. Seeing how the things are at the moment, with 0 points on gen against someone that has an above average genjutsu skill is a clean cut death, even if you have 100 ninjutsu, 100 taijutsus, 100 kenjutsus and 100 health... if you can not use your senses, your skills automatically turn to 0.

EDIT: Not to mention that the unlocking of the gates is not something that every taijutsus master possesses. This is something close to Senjutsu and Fuinjutsu level, something like a special ability. So it should be that either you have Senjutsu either you have the 8th Gates. If he, with 100 points on Tai, has access to all 8 gates, then me with 80 points should have access to at least the first 2 gates...
I tryed to make an objective analysis, and I hope it was as accurate as possible.

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Mars on November 03, 2016, 16:34:16

It's just a story so I don't mind. Shiv used my character as a way for me to lose and I like that. It's not really a big deal and doesn't impact my pride as it isn't real.

And my character's age isn't a troll. I love anime characters who are super strong but are young/have a very youthful appearance, e.g yagura, gon, killua, young goku, lucy from elfen lied.

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Kings_Head on November 03, 2016, 17:44:51

Quote from: Mars on November 03, 2016, 16:34:16

It's not really a big deal and doesn't impact my pride as it isn't real.

Mars please, i know there is a little part of you that is annoyed that you got your ass kicked by a Kirishima xD Kappa

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Mars on November 03, 2016, 21:58:40

Quote from: Kings_Head on November 03, 2016, 17:44:51

Mars please, i know there is a little part of you that is annoyed that you got your ass kicked by a Kirishima xD Kappa

Not annoyed, reassured more than anything. Reassured because I know the only time a Kirishima will kick my ass is in a story. Fiction motherfucker.
A scenario where I get my ass kicked by a Kirishima never be real.

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Reminance on November 03, 2016, 22:06:40

Quote from: Mars on November 03, 2016, 21:58:40

Quote from: Kings_Head on November 03, 2016, 17:44:51
Mars please, i know there is a little part of you that is annoyed that you got your ass kicked by a Kirishima xD Kappa

Not annoyed, reassured more than anything. Reassured because I know the only time a Kirishima will kick my ass is in a story. Fiction motherfucker.
A scenario where I get my ass kicked by a Kirishima never be real.

DROP THAT SHOTGUN BRO

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: Kings_Head on November 03, 2016, 23:42:33

Quote from: Mars on November 03, 2016, 21:58:40

Quote from: Kings_Head on November 03, 2016, 17:44:51
Mars please, i know there is a little part of you that is annoyed that you got your ass kicked by a Kirishima xD Kappa

Not annoyed, reassured more than anything. Reassured because I know the only time a Kirishima will kick my ass is in a story. Fiction motherfucker.
A scenario where I get my ass kicked by a Kirishima never be real.

@Mars
Well shit you have now made it my mission to annihilate you and i can do it all i need to do is believe in myself and i will slowly become Kasuke the strongest player known in the SLO history

(http://puu.sh/s5DK1/0df6431ffc.png)

Title: Re: SLO Arena Battle #10 - Kuria Kaiyo (Mars) vs Konohuro Kirishima
Post by: UchihaTsukumi on November 05, 2016, 20:20:40

>MemeCep
>my mission to annihilate you

(http://puu.sh/s7Cq7/abf78c0b08.jpg)

Shinobi Life Online

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